If I was going to make the book better I would read the book like the story is told to make it more exciting. I would try to picture it in my head like if it was really happening to make it more interesting. I would try to do those two things because if you do then you will get into the book more and it would be like it was really happening.
In the book Diary of a Wimpy Kid I think Greg should have wrote "Vote Rowley" instead of "Vote Rowley Jefferson Social Chairsperson", I also think the author should have drawn each girl different, because the only thing different is the hair!
How could you make the book better? Describe changes the author could have included that would have made the book more exciting and interesting. Please use specific details from the book to help explain changes you would make
My book is fantastic. Really it is. The City Of Bones series is fundamental. I wouldn't change that much of this book. I only have four complaints about the whole series. First: I don't like how its set up. Like the point of view. Its written in third person but still tells what some of the characters are thinking and feeling. I like it in just one persons point of view. Second: I would like there to be more action and violence. This is a very exciting series there are demons constantly trying to kill the shadowhunters. But I would love to see more of that. Its my favorite when they are in a huge battle. Everyone's killing. Its awesome! I would just like to see more of it. Third: I wish that Clary one of the main characters would man up a lot. She's never that big demon killer. She's always just scared and has Jace come and save her. Ug! I think she needs to step up and show them just how bad of a shadowhunter she is. That she's not some scared mundane. Fourth: They need to cut the Romeo and Juliet stuff out. They need to lessen the romance. I am a person who is not fond of romance at all. They are to worried about their relationship other than the fact that Valentine and demons are going to destroy the world. I say that they should just BRAKE UP ALREADY! Anyways that's all that I have to complain about. Other than that its great! I highly recommended it. That's for reading! Bye1
I am reading Smile by Raina Telgemeier. The changes I would make to the book are the details because the book doesn't give a lot of supporting details. I would put more words into it. I would also not change the subject as much as it does.
The way I would make the book more exciting and interesting is I would put more than one main character in it. The only main character it has is Raina. Raina is fun and all but I would like another main character in this book.
I could make the book Rush For Gold better by the main character was a swimmer, she was very good at it, she went into Olympics, she was a professional swimmer. The changes I would make in the book would be she hit her leg or she broke her leg and couldn't swim for a long time. She would still swim but she had to wait because of her injuries.